tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20629898.post6403428538553371375..comments2023-04-12T01:29:59.658-07:00Comments on Shards and Phractures: Nicky Weird: Harvest Moonallandavisjrhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10755527781683974219noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20629898.post-54861893151901694902009-10-10T09:59:21.358-07:002009-10-10T09:59:21.358-07:00Kersley, Vidad, thanks, your comments are apprecia...Kersley, Vidad, thanks, your comments are appreciated.<br /><br />Miko...yeah, I can understand that pet peeve...on the other hand, the adults have all forgotten how to fight vampires, considering it's been the kids doing the fighting for the past forty years...<br /><br />Bandit, you're right, it's missing a lot. The fight in the school should be pages upon pages longer, with lots more traps and surprises, and the scenes with Nicky need to be seriously fleshed out (like that ugly little statue, that needs a lot more description), and the fight itself does need to be expanded upon...which is why I felt it was okay to blog this instead of Drop it, it's going to be heavily rewritten by the time the book is done...<br /><br />...thanks again, everyone...<br /><br />-=ad=-allandavisjrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10755527781683974219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20629898.post-90428002646788326602009-10-09T21:28:48.137-07:002009-10-09T21:28:48.137-07:00I was very excited to read more Nicky Weird! I fe...I was very excited to read more Nicky Weird! I felt this was more like a narrative outline, though. I look forward to the triumphant glory in the midst of characters (including adults) that have been developed along the way, and perhaps a little more of the final temptation of Nicky. You simply <i>must</i> write this series!the bandithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14182485724266514096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20629898.post-48971899956034136642009-10-09T18:02:55.489-07:002009-10-09T18:02:55.489-07:00Great action pacing; good scene cutting. (Pet peev...Great action pacing; good scene cutting. (Pet peeve: adults taking orders from kids.)mikohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03173818684656350104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20629898.post-1513300666415570612009-10-09T06:43:46.164-07:002009-10-09T06:43:46.164-07:00Whoo! Nice!Whoo! Nice!MacLarenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14308887476612019363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20629898.post-82196930324725758722009-10-09T06:43:07.253-07:002009-10-09T06:43:07.253-07:00Whoo! Nice.Whoo! Nice.MacLarenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14308887476612019363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20629898.post-45412092182727440732009-10-09T06:29:30.873-07:002009-10-09T06:29:30.873-07:00Yeah, I'm ready for the rest of the book, now....Yeah, I'm ready for the rest of the book, now.Kersley Fitzgeraldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15419694606135396890noreply@blogger.com